The girl's hands aren't quite right, but when I draw the gloves over them, I think it comes out pretty close to what I want. I might try another pass, but honestly that's can be like an entire day's worth of work, & not sure there'd be enough of an improvement to justify the time.
The only thing that's jumping out to me as wrong is their relative head sizes. The girl's head is a bigger than the dude's, and their neck lengths are off. I think I'll probably change the dude's to match, although either would work imo. It's only when you put them side by side that it looks strange.
So that's what I see. Really not many changes planned for these two. If you have any comments or artist feedback, get it in now before I start animating. =)
That's kind of a short post, so let's move on a bit more. Here's a picture of all 6 'monsters' together:
A few weeks ago I mentioned that I'd consider requests for sex positions. Well now's your chance. A few rules before we start though:
- Your pose must have 4 variations of the same position, and they need to include at least one phase where the hero is dominant and one phase where the monster is dominant. For example, I could do something with doggy style like: Phase 1: Hero reaches under legs & gives handjob, Phase 2: Monster grinds cock on ass, Phase 3, Doggy style penetration, Phase 4, Doggy style, anal penetration. Your suggestions don't have to use the same position for all four phases, but remember that there's no animation between the different phases, so keeping the poses similar is important. Having them teleport from say a missionary position to a standing one looks wierd (imo).
- Try to limit vaginal/anal penetration phases. Single monsters should only have one, and double team attacks can have one or two. (My doggy style example above fails this rule, which is why I haven't used it yet).
- All the monsters are drawn from the side. Try to keep the requests to something I could realistically show from this view. I'm not completely opposed to drawing the heros at new angles, but I'm not in favor of it either.
Oh, & lastly, please don't be disappointed if I don't use your suggestions, or if I do something similar but not what you had in mind. I'm a big believer that too many chefs will spoil the stew, so anything said here will get my spin on it. Should help keep the game coherent, or failing that, at least maintain a thread of commonality.
Thanks
DirtyC101
when does the full game come out?
ReplyDeleteAssuming that only double teams of the same race will mix, my suggestion for any pair would be
ReplyDeleteM alone:
1. Footjob with hero on back
2. monster rubs cock against pussy (missionary)
3. missionary vaginal penetration, monster hands holding down heros arms
4. faster missionary with larger thrusts and one hand on hero's neck for dominant effect
M/M double: (If your feeling up to trying a new angle, i think the forward look would fit well)
1. Hero sitting spread eagle facing camera, monsters using her thighs and underknee (dunno the official term o.o)
2. Hero standing, monsters grabbing her wrists and forcing her to double handjob by her waist
3.Hero in sideways standing doggy position with back raised, one monster behind vaginal penetration, monster in front of her recieving a two handed handjob
4. Doggy style double penetration, one monster below with vaginal penetration, one standing behind her with anal penetration.
M/F
1. Hero forcing F monster to give head to M monster while both kneeling
2. Hero sucking M monsters cock while F monster licks either the underside of the cock or the Hero someplace
3. Hero kneeling having a forced titfuck by M monster while F monster behind the hero grabs her wrists and holds them behind her
4. Same as 3. except M monster is now reaching her mouth also during the titfuck while F monster keeps hero's hands locked with one hand, and forces her head down on the cock with the other
Im not sure if you will be creating situations with F/F, as in the first game the fox girl would not allow double teaming if she got to the hero first ^^'
Artistic feedback: leg size on male elves (to big), feet size on female elves (to big)
ReplyDeletePosition:
Triplets (know its standard but its a classic), same variations usable no matter what gender mix off M or F
1. Player dominant: Front view, PC sitting down in middle, npc left, right and under. Using hands for left and right, feets for under. (alt PC standing up)
2. Front view, PC on knees, sucking left, hand to right, the one under moved to behind pc, stroking member against agains pussy.
3. Same pos as "2." PC sucking two dicks (forced insertion, pc face towards screen), npc behind insert into pussy
4. Side view, NPC still left, right and under. PC giving head to one side, anal from the other and pussy from under.
Thanks for a really interesting and great game, waiting hopefully for next update :D (hope what i wrote is understandable)
Due u shud release another beta on Halloween
ReplyDeletef/f suggestion, non-species-relevant:
ReplyDeleteM(onster) Dom: H(ero) lies on back, M squatting above her face and lets H lick her (maybe even analingus in this state)
M+: 69 with H beneath, maybe M in passive state, looking pleased over her shoulder/to H.
H+: 69 with H on top, both enjoying themselves furiously :D
H Dom: Like M. Dom. reversed, but H rubbing Ms pussy additionally.
f/f/f, non-species-relevant:
M Dom: H on back lying, M1 squatting over her face, M2 fingering (fisting? I'm not into fisting, but as a sign of Dom maybe) H, eschanging pleased looks with M1
M+: H lying on back, M1 on all fours above getting licked by H, kissing M2 which squats and fingers H
H+: M1 on all fours kissing M2 which squats and masturbates while H squats behind M1, fingering her pussy (maybe masturbates, too)
H Dom: M1 & M2 lying missionary kissing each other while H fingers both of them.
Maybe I'll come up with more, but that's it for now :D
A question remains: Will we see four-legged NPCs as friends or foes?
Here I am again, DirtyC. I've got some positioning for you. Just my latest way of contributing.
ReplyDelete1: Female + Player (this one is all side view)
---Monster Domming: Enemy is behind player, standing, screwing player anally with a strapon. Player has a pained look on their face from the anal (pain optional)
---Monster +: Enemy standing, player kneeling. Player is sucking on/fallating the strapon, sucking it like it was a cock.
---Player +: Both standing. Player has removed strapon and is holding it away in one hand, fingering the pussy on the enemy with the other.
---Player Domme: Both standing. Player is using the strapon by hand like a dildo on enemy, vaginally... possibly fingering anally (might be hard to draw both at once).
Note in any of my suggestions, change stuff around as you like. Omit at will, I'd be happy to see ANYTHING I suggested in here.
Idea 2: Male/Female/Player (ganging up, from side at all times.)
---Monster Domme: Male Is screwing player doggystyle from behind, anally/vaginally. Either works. Again I suggest some pain for the anal to show it's there. Female is fucking player's face with a strapon.
---Monster +: Male is hot-dogging player from behind, doggy style. Player is stroking off the strapon as if it was a cock, maybe pushing it against the female.
---Player +: Player and female have swapped places and are standing (order left to right: m-f-p, p being player). Male and female are making out, player is fingering female from behind.
---Player Domme +: Female is screwing male from behind standing with strapon (a little bit of variety, some F on M strapon action), while Player eggs them on somehow.
Again, any segment of my suggetions could be used, I claim no right or insist on nothing be included in it's entirety. You can say the ideas are yours and I won't care.
Idea 3: Male/Player
---Monster Domme: Enemy sitting, player in enemy lap. Player is bouncing in enemy's lap, either riding them (either hole), or being bounced by hand.
---Monster +: Enemy sitting, player still in lap. Enemy is grinding cock between player's thighs. Still bouncing slightly, also perhaps playing with player's tits.
---Player +: Enemy sitting, player kneeling in front of enemy, giving hand-job.
---Player Domme: Enemy sitting, player standing next to enemy, giving one-footed footjob... putting cock between toes, or any footjob variant. Player has arms crossed in a superior manner, enemy has closed, pleasured eyes. Or such.
I'll stop spamming you with ideas now. If you want more, I've got tons, but can send them via e-mail if you like to reduce comment spam. I will however say that the pain makes anal more obvious in general, even if it's just a little, as you can't SEE the holes from the side. Last thing, though I don't have a whole scene for it.
Tribbing. Scissoring, pussy-grinding, whatever you wanna call it, a female enemy and the player grinding their pussies together. Dunno what phase it would go in.
I guess I'll throw my hat into the ring on this one, since you requested. The one I had in mind was the female rabbit and including the staff somehow, so starting from your formula (Player dominant, player minor advantage, monster minor advantage, monster dominant.)
ReplyDeletePlayer dominant: Has the bunny grappled by her ankle/calf with one hand, the other is handling the staff to push it between the bunny's breasts into her mouth.
Player minor advantage: Staff isn't used (each of their hands are holding it in the background or it's set aside) and the player is stroking the bunny's breast (or biting at her nipple.)
Monster minor advantage: Again, staff is unused, could have the monster in stronger control of it, or possibly using it to partially restrain the player while caressing at either the player's breasts or rubbing fingers against her thigh.
Monster dominant: Either a mirror of the player's dominance, or the monster has the staff against the player's through while frotting (rubbing genitalia) with the player.
And that should be throat, and I dunno why my name is showing up weird, it should read SetsunaSnow, my AIM name.
ReplyDeletePlayer with 1 enemy Male.
ReplyDeletePosition is Male Standing holding the Player Character up at the waist from behind so that she is not touching the ground.
Player Dominant: Male holding Player Character up, Player Character reaching under to stroke Cock between legs. Cum should be doing handjob.
Player+ : Male holding Player Character up, Player Character rubbing cock between thighs (cock peeking through thighs obviously) Cum should spurt through thighs.
Male+: Male holding Player Character up, Male cock pressing at Player Characters arsehole with Male attempting to pull Player Character onto it and Player Character using one hand on Male thigh/hip trying to hold herself off the cock and looking panicky. (Should be obvious through leg postitioning that the cock is pressing on the rosebud)Cum should be splatting against her anal hole and her looking relieved (if possible)
Male dominant: If you can do the animation of the Player Character finally failing to hold him up and sinking onto his cock with a pained look on Player Characters face and a triumphant look on Males face then do so as the Male becomes dominant. After that the animation should be a defeated looking Player Character wincing as she is bounced on the Males cock. Cum Should be internal with extra spilling out.
If you like this idea I'll post my suggestion for the other variations of this (multiple chars and multiple sexes)
BTW DirtyC, I've been a longtime fan here and on teh LoK forums and I've finally decided to setup a spare account to post here :P.
Hero and 1 male (Probably one of the smaller ones)
ReplyDeleteHero dominate: Monster standing and hero on knees (maybe behind) giving a handjob with a smirk
Hero advantage: same position (in front) titjob
Monster advantage: Blowjob looking embarressed/defeated
Monster dominate: Deepthroat with monsters hand on the back of the hero's head and with the hero's eyes wide open
Face sitting
ReplyDeletedoggy style
bent over lifted up in the air
pile driver
double penetration
i can go on man
Hey all, just wanted to respond to some questions.
ReplyDelete-Yes, there will be female/female double team options.
-Four legged? You mean like dogs & horses, or more like centaurs & dryders? Technically either is a possibility, but currently neither is planned. That could change of course...
-Tripple Teaming was never planned, but I think I can add it. I'll look into it.
Think that covers the questions. If you have more, I'm going to keep this post up another week. Bring them on. ;)
DirtyC101
I have yet to see a game with well done situational gangrape (more than 2) So adding a third will put you at the top of the charts, also;
ReplyDelete" You mean like dogs & horses, or more like centaurs & dryders?"
... Yes. All of those things (But more honestly, whatever is easiest, dont want to be redickyoulus)
Sorry for double post, but maybe another demo for all these new changes would be good, you could think of it like "Well the players could test the changes and I only need to sit back and wait!"
ReplyDeleteLess work for you and we get what we wanted, works out beautifully (I know its not ready yet btw)
I realy like the way the elves look. My suggestion for them is to perhaps instead of them using physical force they should instead use magick to force the Hero into submission. For either the male or female, the first pose would be the elf's hands held by one hand of the hero while they pleasure them with the other hand. Second pose would be the elf has oen hand free and is gropeing the hero on he breasts or rear end. the third pose would be the Elf using their spell to make the hero get on her knees and eithe lick or suck them. Then the forth pose would be the spell has completly worked and the hero is deepthroating the male cock or having her face held firmly against the female's pussy as she licks it. I know you already made a lot of enemies, and it may be too close to a repeat of older games but I think some scalies would never hurt in a game like this. Good work on the monsters and the game so far, keep it up.
ReplyDelete@dirtyc101:
ReplyDelete"-Four legged? You mean like dogs & horses, or more like centaurs & dryders? Technically either is a possibility, but currently neither is planned. That could change of course..."
As for me, I'm in favor of the first choice :D Wether it be horses, dogs, cats, sheep, goat, bulls, kangaroos... XD
The idea of a pet companion appealed to me. Of course, getting one active in the game itself is very difficult but at least in cutscenes or at the beginning/safe spot in a level there could be a friendly face like a pet companion which can also offer you a 'special treatment' :D Or horny, enemy watchdogs should be fine too XD
Should include face sitting for heroine dominate on male, please. Or teasing.
ReplyDeleteI am not a native english speaker, so if you have any problem understanding my english, feel free to ask.
ReplyDeleteThis scenes have been imagined keeping your three rules in mind (the first rule is one of the thing that make your game so great anyway).
against a male opponant :
Player as the dom - Ennemy is on his knees and uses his tongue to satisfie the player (standing)
Player + - Player is on his knees and uses her hands to stroke the ennemy's cock (ennemy standing)
Ennemy + - Same scene as above but the player as her mouth wide open for the finish and looks into his eyes. Additionnally, she could use one of her hand to masturbate herself.
Ennemy as the dom - Same scene as above but both are now masturbating themself and the player is licking the ennemy's feets (so this scene can potentially have no armor escape, to change gameplay a bit).
The whole idea is to lower the player's position progressively.
against a female :
Player as the dom - Player is sitting, ennemy is on all four in front of her and licks her pussy (or feets)
Player + - Player is sitting, ennemy is on her knees in front of her and rubs player's breasts
Ennemy + - Ennemy pushes player on her back and sits on her mouth (and enjoys)
Ennemy as the dom - Ennemy is still sitting on player's mouth, but player is additionnaly forcing a dildo into her own pussy
against a female :
A very classic 69 with ennemy always on top for all the phases :
Player as the dom - Player is forcing a dildo into her opponant while the ennemy is licking her pussy
Player + - Normal 69 with both licking each other pussy
Ennemy + - Ennemy is now just sitting on player's face
Ennemy as the dom - Player is still licking, ennemy is now forcing a dildo into the player's pussy.
against a male and a female :
ReplyDeletePlayer as the dom - Both girls are kneeling in front of the man's cock. The player is forcing (with her hand) the girl to perform a blowjob.
Player + - Player is doing a blowjob while the other girl is licking the ennemy's cock
Ennemies + - Reverse situation of the first one, with the ennemy girl forcing the player to perform a blowjob
Ennemies as the doms - the girl is now standing behind and forcing the blowjob with her foot (the entire scene could have no armor escape)
(I have just realised that someone has posted something very similar before. Still a little variation)
(also, you could make a reverse of the already created scene with the pirate and lady pirate)
against two male :
Player as the dom - Player is standing, ennemies are using their tongue on sensitive parts (breasts, clitoris)
Player + - Player is putted on her knees and starts licking ennemies sensitive parts (cocks)
Ennemies + - Player sucks one ennemy while the other is maintaining her arms locked behind her back
Ennemies as the doms - Player keeps sucking on one's cock while the other is stroking his cock in front of an empty glass (could have no armor escape)
against two female (one with a strap-on) :
Player as the dom - player (potentially already on her knees to limit changes between phases) has her pussy licked by a girl with a strap-on on all four, and the other ennemy, on the other side, is gently rubbing player's breasts
Player + - Player is on her knees and sucked on the strap-on of one of the girl while the other "help" the movement of her head with her hands
Ennemies + - the ennemy sucked push the player on all four and starts to penetrate her with the strap-on while the female ennemy is masturbating by watching the scene
Ennemies as the doms - Same as above but the female ennemy masturbating has positionned herself to be licked by the (still fucked) player
against a female mage (this scene is inspired by the game Bayonnetta)
At the beginning, the female mage summons a wooden horse under them
Player as the dom - the player is standing on it, and watch with a vicious smile the ennemy in a more unconfortable position (if that could help you to recyclate, the player could actually be in almost the same position than with the two pirates when she is dom)
Player + - Both are sitting on it (they could exchange kisses)
Ennemy + - a simple reverse of "player as the dom"
Ennemy as the dom - same scene as above but the player is also forced (with hands) to lick her opponant's pussy
I'm tellin ya, man, bottom row. Glamour slammer. http://rule34.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=572779
ReplyDeletePhase 4: Monster glamour slammering player
Phase 3: Grabbing player from behind, rubbing against them
Phase 2: player giving monster reacharound
Phase 1: Reverse phase 4. Maybe fisting or something, I dunno mang. I dunno.
There should be one playable male character just so this game can reach all kinds of people instead of just straight and bi ones, in the male specter anyways. Its just something to consider, plus all the ones against the idea will still have girl characters to play as.
ReplyDeleteyou should make it look like shes actually trying to escape in some scenarios and also more mixed group sex positions would be awesome
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